PLOT!!!ASAP!!!

[Moonfur]

OK! I just had a great plot idea! I think it would be interesting. I'll put my plot idea below, and if you have an idea that would go along with my idea, pm me it and I may add it if I can make it fit with my plot idea!!!!

The lands are being attacked by loners! These loners are evil, cruel, and bloodthirsty. They are willing to kill and murder to get power. Most of these cats have descended from the evilest and bloodthirstiest of them all, Tito, The Murderer. He is known throughout all the lands as The Murderer Tito, and he has killed and murdered many cats, and mated with many others. His fifth son, Shadow, was different from the rest though, he was unique, he was good and he was not bloodthirsty for power. This upset Tito, and he beat his son, as he did to all his others. At some point, he murdered his own mate, mother to his first five sons. Shadow, however, did not know this. By now, he has met several cats fathered by his father. These cats are killing cats, and he finds more wounded and almost dead cats littering the lands. Now Shadow has a goal, to stop his murderous father, before the forest is destroyed. And, suddenly he meets a goergeous she-cat, named Star, comes in to help him rid the lands of his cruel father. But will they stop his father before its too late? Or will the home of the clans be destroyed? Will this be the end of Shadow's and Star's nobleness and goodness?

ALSO, PLOT CHARACTERS:

We have some openings on plot characters, and there should be more than enough characters for each person to have one. There are lots. ^^

Name: Bluepelt(to be Oneye later during plot, he gets his eye clawed out by Tito, and Shadow saves him)
Gender: Tom
Age: 30 moons
Clan/Rank: Mistclan/Warrior
Description: Bluepelt is a silverish/bluish tom with light green eyes(eye). His tail is long and tipped in white, and his legs are long and hes a good runner.
Personality: Bluepelt is a loyal Mistclan warrior, and he was hoping to become deputy, but when Jayfeather was picked, he just congratulated him and was not jealous at all. He is calm and relaxed, and brave and kind.
Played by: FLICKERSTAR

Name: Tito(The Murderer Tito or Tito The Murderer)
Gender: Tom
Age: 86 moons
Clan/Rank: Loner/Loner
Description: Tito is a black tom with a white V on his chest, the simble of evil. His tail is long and his fur is thick, his legs are long and muscular, and his neck fur is thick, making it harder to kill him. His claws are white, long, curved, and razor sharp. His fangs are white, and stained with blood, and very long and sharp. He is as big as a full grown tiger. His eyes are blood red, and his whiskers are long and white. His ears are large and coned, and pointy, making him an excelent listener. His spine is strong, making it harder for a cat to kill him. His paws are huge and black, and his muzzle is long and huge. His nose is black too, and hes a good hunter and tracker, one of the best. I'm sure you get the picture by now.
Personality: Hes an evil, evil, evil, evil, bloodthirsty cat whos goal is to kill cats and gain power over all the clans and loners and all the cats. I'm sure you get the picture already.
Kits: Shadow, Ghost, Mist, Death, and Phantom.
Current Mate(s): Sasha, Fallen, Last Chance
Played by: KAZUL

Name: Star
Gender: She-cat
Age: 21 moons
Clan/Rank: Loner/Loner
Description: Star is a pure white she-cat with fern green eyes. Her tail is long, and her paws are small. Her nose is pink and her fur is short. Her whiskers are long and white, and her muzzle is long too.
Personality: Star is sweet and kind, clever and sly. She stands for all that is good, and she is noble and brave.
Played by: ONYXRAIN

Name: Sasha
Gender: She-cat
Age: 70 moons
Clan/Rank: Loner/Loner
Description: Sasha is a red-brown she-cat with evil amber eyes. Her legs are long and powerful, and her tail and whiskers are long too. Her fangs are long and white, and her stomach fur is a creamish color.
Personality: She is pure evil, she is one of Tito's many mates. She is evil and mean, but she does not crave for power, she only wants to kill cats.
Played by: NO ONE

Name: Ghost
Gender: Tom
Age: 29 moons
Clan/Rank: Loner/Loner
Description: Ghost is a light grey tom, almost white, hence his name. His eyes are a light green, and his nose is pink, and he has long white whiskers. His legs are short and stocky, but hes well-muscled. His tail is a just a short little stump.
Personality: He is evil and bloodthirsty, just like his father, Tito, and he gets his looks from fis beautiful mother, Last Chance.
Played by: FERALSTORM

Name: Mist
Gender: She-cat
Age: 50 moons
Clan/Rank: Loner/Loner
Description: Mist is a light grey she-cat, and when shes under the moon, she looks like misty fog. Her legs are longand muscled, and her tail is long too. Her nose is pink, and her neck is thick.
Personality: Mist is evil, mean, and a natural bully. She doesn't crave power, but she loves to kill other cats.
Played by: FLICKERSTAR

Name: Phantom
Gender: Tom
Age: 50 moons
Description: phantom is a light grey tom, and he often sneaks around the clan cats' lands, and he looks like a phantom. His eyes are blood red, and his nose is pink. He is basically a miniture of his father, except his nose is pink, he doesnt have the V on his chest, and hes not black.
Personality: Phantom is just like his father. Mean, evil, bloodthirsty, greives for power. Likes to kill and murder cats for no reason.
Played by: WHISKER

Name: Last Chance
Gender: She-cat
Age: 52 moons
Description: Last Chance is a pure white she-cat with violet eyes. Her tail is stumpy, she is muscular, a good runner. Her nose is pink, fangs are long and white.
Personality: Last Chance is sweet, but shes too stupid to know that Tito is using her, and that he is evil.
Played by: FERALSTORM

Name: Fallen
Gender: She-cat
Age: 90 moons
Description: Fallen is an evil, brown she-cat with a creamy white tummy. Her tail is long, and her fur is long too. She has dull, grey eyes, and shes half the size of a tiger.
Personality: Fallen is evil, mean, a bully, smart, sly cunning. These are the reasons Tito chose her for his mate, so that these traits would pass down into their future kits.
Played by: NO ONE

Name: Death
Gender: Tom
Age: 40 moons
Description: Death is a pure black tom with blood red eyes. His nose is black, his fur is black, his whiskers are black, his claws and paw pads are black. His belly fur is black too. Except he has a white half-V on his chest. (half-V: \ ) He is a miniture of his father, except he has a half-V instead of a full-V.
Personality: Death is evil, evil, evil, evil, and mean! Just like his father... hes bloodthirsty for power, he loves to kill cats, prey, anything thats an animal.
Played by: WISHINGDREAM

ILL ADD MORE LATER!!! TO PLAY ONE OF THESE CHARACTERS, THEN POST A RP EX WITH 4-10 COMPLETE SENTENCES BELOW.

EVERYONE CAN NOW HAVE UP TO 2 PLOT CHARACTERS!! I ONLY DO THIS ON SPECIAL OCCASIONS!!! SO IGNORE THE RULE IN THE RULES THAT STATES YOU CAN ONLY HAVE 1 PLOT CHARACTER!!!

[Flickerstar]

A lithe blue gray warrior made his way slowly throug the undergrowth that littered this land. His white tipped tail held close to him, as if he ws worried he would lose it. His pale green eyes scaning hte clearing in front of him he pawsed, and paarted his jaws. Letting the air fill his mouth he blinked, Mouse, Rabbit, and something else. Loner maybe? Loners' weren't evil, some were crazy but this didn't bother him. Padding forward he froze when he heard the rush and crumple of leaves to his right, turning he spotted the cat. The cat was small, had a white pelt, and evil yellow eyes. His claws were unsheathed, and he had his jaws parted in a evil grimise. Unsheathing his claws he was bowled over, but managed to scramble to his feet in enough time to spot the loner launching it's self at him again. Moving swiftly to the left he reached out a paw and smacked the cats shoulder, sending the cat to the ground. Leaping to the cat's back he bit into it's scruff, and held on tight. Making some funny hissing noise through the fur he growled and clawed. The cat yowled in pain, and Bluepelt let go of him. Watching the loner streak away he sighed, and limped to a tree to lick his wounds, why had a loner attacked him?

((*yawn* meh tired))

[*~Onyxrain~*]

ooo i would like to play Star!!

The silvery moon reflected on the crystal clear pool in the middle of the clearing. All was silent. The stars were twinkling brightly in the night sky, and the trees gently blew in the soft breeze. The reeds rustled and a sleek white cat with startling green eyes stepped out. She moved to the calm waters edge, and dipped her head. She drank her fill, before looking up at the bright stars. Suddenly, another, brown cat steps into the clearing.
Star moved back, not to sure.
"Who are you?" She asks.
"I am Gerath." The cat replies.
"Oh" A long silence fills the air
"Very well... Gerath." Star says, "I welcome you if you are a friend, but if not..." Star left the sentence hanging.
Gerath nods. "I am neither."
Star narrows her eyes. "How can that be?"
Suddenly, a loud clang breaks the peaceful silence
"What was that?" She looks at Garath
His body seems to glitter and fade, and then he is gone.

Star opened her eyes. She was lying down in some sweet smelling hay, in an old abandoned barn. Star shakes her head. it was a dream then? She thought, and she got up. well, if it was, it was a real lywierd one. Star stepped outside, and blinking in the sunlight, set out to search for prey. Little did she know, it wasn't really a dream after al......

[Moonfur]

good, but here we RP past tense... so could you just edit it so its past tense?

[*~Onyxrain~*]

sorry, i hope thats better.

[Feralstorm]

((Ghost?))

A small rabbit stood up on its hind legs, long ears perked up and nose twitching. No danger was heard nor scented, so it went back down to enjoy its small patch of baby grass.

An off-white tom opened his mouth wide, taking in the scents. Mmm.... Rabbit, he thoughted silently to himself as the scent came towards him. Luckily, he was downwind, so the rabbit couldn't scent him, and it wouldn't hear him either way. He stalked up carefully, short legs carefully stepping over dry leaves, stubby tail sticking straight out behind him. He licked his lips and narrowed his green eyes when the prey was only a fox-length away. Then, he jumped. He landed a mouselength away from the rabbit, swiped it up, and bit it hard on the neck.

It was only rabbit blood, but it'd have to do for now. As he ate, he thought of cats. Dead cats. Cats with their eyes gouged out and throats ripped out. He swallowed the last bit of meat and got up, throwing the skeleton over his shoulder.

Pure heaven.

He walked away.

[Moonfur]

PPL I'm now making it so that you can have TWO plot charries!!!

[Wishingdream]

who is playing shadow and if know one is may I?

[Moonfur]

I play him

[Wishingdream]

ok. I will try for death then.

A dark black cat stalked through the forest he was hunting, not for a mouse or rodent but for a prisoner. His blood red eyes scaned the silent forest no wait..almost silent forest, a white cat moved some bracken creating a slight sound. 'Got ya now' Death thought an image of the white cat covered in blood crossed his mind 'yes tha'till be good punishment' his teeth shone like the white sash like mark on his chest. He made thre large bounds then landed right on top of the terrifide prisoner, "No don't ki-gahhag" the large black paw of Death now shone deep red, the white cat was dead with a reflecton of the color on Death's paw. "Hahaha! fool! no-beast can escape the great Death! Hahaha!" He shoved his muzzle into the cats fur and lapped up the blood of his prey. He left the carcass of the poor cat in a ditch.

[Moonfur]

umm... you have one run on sentence, and a couple short ones. Can you make the long one it two or three sentences? Also, please use correct capitalizetion.

[Feralstorm]

Aughieo I wanted Death. XD Oh well, Last Chance sounds nice. :3 I'm just assuming that Last Chance is Ghost's mother because of their tails and pelts. And age. XD

"Tito!" Last Chance called. The large black cat padded up to her, sticking out his white 'V' for a chest proudly. "Love, do you know where Ghost went?" Last Chance asked innocently, eyes wide with anxiety. "I'm afraid he's been gone too long-- who knows what might have happened to him? I know he's strong and smart, Starclan knows the traits were passed from us, but many other cats lurk these forests..."

"Nonsense, Chance," Tito growled, twitching slightly at the name of Starclan. "If you believe in his strength and wisdom, he'll defeat any cat who gets in his way. And he's old enough to take care of himself. He'll come back soon. I called for him."

Last Chance perked up at this. "Oh, Tito, I knew I could count on you to cheer me up!" she cooed at the older cat. She brushed her pelt fondly against his and muttered softly, "You're always so kind."

Tito smiled at this, his large red-stained teeth glinting off the sunlight. "I know."

[♥~Whisker~♥]

A slight glint of light shouldered it's way into the deep tunnel. A grey cat lay there, in the middle of the floor. The hard rock next to the tom was the only sense of protection, though he did not need it. The glimmer of morning soon dawned onto the cat, and he flickered his eyes awake, no hint of emotion in his body. You could feel the chill of his icy breath from a fox-tail away, and his tail fliped back and forth in a 'tick, tick' sort of way. His heart was so cold, and rock hearted, not even the fleas would attack him with horrid bites.

The tom licked his chops from his late meal at early Sun-up. The blood still trickled down from the dead prey, long-since dead, rotting, and dried up. The once mother rabbit and her over-populated home full of a sum of three juvinle rabbits, and a few babies, long-since eaten whole. He got up, the memories of the rabbit masscre still fresh in his mind from the previous night-fall. He then streched out his muscles, sore with overuse, but no expresion to the bones cracking. All the animals in a miles' distance were either killed, hurt, dying, or hiding in his attack for power, all in a moon.

[Moonfur]

uummm..... Whisker, which cat is that for?

[♥~Whisker~♥]

XD Shadow, srry... I had to go that moment...